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Damian Qualshy 6時間, 42分
I am losing my mind with this one
Minicomic page 133
Damian Qualshy 15時間, 36分
People are still talking about time travel making no sense, so I want to say (again) how I see it:

*Timeline A:* This is the original future timeline that we see Trunks come from first to create Timeline B. This is also the one where he defeats the Androids using remote control, dies and Cell travels back to create timeline C.
*Timeline B:* This is the timeline that we NEVER see officially. No Cell, and Androids are defeated using the remote.
*Timeline C:* This is the timeline that we follow in Manga and Anime. Pretty straightforward.
*Timeline D:* This is the timeline Future Trunks "went back to", but he experienced Timeline C so he's stronger and defeats the Androids and Cell on his own.

And this is where it gets complicated now...

*Timeline E:* This is the timeline Zamasu switches bodies with Goku, and then travels to Timeline D using a Time Ring, where we see the events of Future Saga unfold in DBS. It originates from Timeline C, we only see it in a flashback. The split happens because of Trunks again and because of that you could argue that this is Timeline C and DBS from that point follows a Timeline E instead, but that's confusing.
*Timeline F:* This is supposedly timeline where Freeza destroyed the Earth and Whis doesn't rewind time.
*Timeline G:* This is supposedly timeline where Zamasu kills Gowasu and Whis doesn't rewind time.

Timelines F and G (in my opinion) shouldn't even exist, because we don't know how exactly does Whis rewinding time work. Does it actually create split timelines? He's an angel after all, he can do ANYTHING and doesn't need to be bound by such rules.

*Timeline H:* This is the future timeline that Future Trunks creates at the end of Future Saga in DBS, because he traveled back (again) to "his own" timeline but before Goku Black showed up. Theoretically, this comic should follow Timeline H.

Time Rings we see Gowasu holding don't seem to showcase this properly, as the amount of them doesn't stick. BUT we know that Universe 11 had a time machine and it's why time travel is prohibited in the first place, iirc. Both Infinite Zamasu (in the manga) and Gowasu (in the Anime at least) mention it.

And now.. Every time we see Immortal Zamasu, he's from the Timeline D. Every time we see Goku Black, he's from the Timeline E.
Beerus destroying Zamasu in Timeline C didn't affect Timeline D or Goku Black, but why? He's a deity after all. Well.. Their reasoning was that Time Ring protected him, and I can buy it. However I can't understand is why people still ask why is Goku Black here or think that Immortal Zamasu shouldn't exist in the Future (Timeline D) when he's not even the same character. Like, the first question was literally answered in the show and the other is answered by.. lack of ability to read, I guess?


Boy I hope this won't get removed for being hella off-topic.. But I will be glad if it helps people understand that time travel in the show isn't that much confusing, just kind of brushed off in Future Saga and never properly addressed the mechanics or who traveled where and why. But it's only one additional timeline after all.
The inexorable distortion page 33
Damian Qualshy 1日, 14時間
King Kindred was saying:
kcheeb was saying: kkk was saying: Stop explaining stuff to your enemy, Trunks!

So this timeline is the result of Beerus erasing Zamazu? It was a bit ambiguous when Whis explained it in Chapter 1. Still, I don't understand how erasing the Zamasu who would eventually become Goku Black can lead to a Goku Black existing in the future. My bet is that something else happened (in addition to Beerus erasing Zamasu) causing a Goku Black to still exist, and arrive earlier than in the original future.

It can't be the timeline where zamasu was eliminated by beet us. That happened in main timeline

I don't think authkr knows what he's doing

There are always two Zamasu. This one hasn't recruited his immortal partner yet. The one that was meant to be the immortal is the one that was erased by Beerus.


No.. The immortal Zamasu is Future Trunks' timeline Zamasu. Goku Black is the variant of Zamasu that Beerus encountered.
The inexorable distortion page 33
Damian Qualshy 2日, 6時間
RetroOVER9000 was saying:
So is this Anime or Manga cannon? If it's Manga Cannon then how will Trunks beat a thousand Zamasu when he Ultimately separates himself? If it's Anime Cannon, how will Trunks beat Zamasu literally morphing with the Universe? Is Zeno going to have to handle things again? There seems to be a lot of possibilities to how this could go. Where is regular Zamasu anyways? Is he not here? Does that mean no fusion between the two to result in Zamasu Squared will be happening?


It should be Manga canon, but I won't go against the idea of using bits from both. Just to make it more interesting.

However..
Infinite Zamasu happened because of the potara fusion. Universe Zamasu happened because he got completely disintegrated, but he's immortal.

Black is killable, Zamasu can be dealt with a Mafuuba. Then again, the cover of this series kind of spoiled what could happen so Trunks apparently fuses with Zamasu. Maybe he defeats Black or pinches him down and takes the earring, seeing no other options than to force the fusion with the immortal Zamasu, and then take care of verymortal Black.
The inexorable distortion page 32
Damian Qualshy 2日, 20時間
Paaah was saying:
Damian Qualshy was saying: Tamamo-no-Bae was saying: I bet there is no future Zamasu this time around, or he's not with Black.
Since Whis did intervene, things just turned out differently.

What? When did Whis intervene? How would he and why?

They might count Whis telling Trunks and Mai about this future timeline to return to. That's all I can think though since in the main story before these events Beerus was the one killing a Zamasu (causing this new future to be created).

Also at the start of this story Beerus flat out tells Whis not to help Trunks and Mai (by warning the Gods in the new timeline about Black) since they have "done enough for them already" narrowing down the ways Whis could have intervened to just telling Trunks he could go to a future with a chance Black can be stopped before he arrives but evidently that didn't happen and instead it's back to square one, minus a Zamasu I guess (unless I'm wrong and another does somehow show up).

(I personally think the plan was doomed from the start since Trunks can't warn any Gods since he can't contact them or travel to them

I'm wondering how Zamasu swapped bodies with Goku since this timeline was born after Beerus killed Zamasu before the body swap and future Goku is long dead at this point, but maybe we'll see the Zamasu/Trunks seen on the cover soon or the Goku body can be explained).


It's best to not think about the rules (or lack of them) of time travel in DBS because none of what happened in Trunks' arc made sense. Toss it off as "Time Ring protection" and Beerus having no idea how time travel actually works.
We don't even understand why this timeline diverged in the first place, but I guess it's a ripple effect like with Cell in Z.
The inexorable distortion page 32
Damian Qualshy 16 4月
Tamamo-no-Bae was saying:
I bet there is no future Zamasu this time around, or he's not with Black.
Since Whis did intervene, things just turned out differently.


What? When did Whis intervene? How would he and why? 1 Replie(s)
The inexorable distortion page 32
Damian Qualshy 15 4月
And now for the grant re-reveal and possibly a scare for both Zamasus, that they were in fact defeated.
The inexorable distortion page 32
Damian Qualshy 13 4月
So Tien is facing Gohan by process of elimination. Almost poetic in a way.
Saigo no Son page 48
Damian Qualshy 13 4月
Vault756 was saying:

Damian Qualshy was saying:
Original Cell also had more time to develop and he drank a lot of people to get where he did. This one is rushed to "perfection", and barely out of the tube. His biology lacks the pure power and potential of Frost Demons, all he has is one weak Namek and the three Saiyans, that means one human hybrid at 18k power level and only Namek Saga Vegeta being a Super Saiyan donor.
He IS weaker, has to be. I would confidently say that he should be just above the original's Semi Perfect form, so still formidable but doesn't require Super Saiyan 2 Gohan to be defeated.

Also Cell wasn't "on par" with Kamiccolo. He was outclassed during their first encounter in Gingertown.

In fairness I believe Cell only needed to drink all those people because he was weakened after having to revert to a larval stage to fit in Trunks time machine. An easy detail to forget but Cell was actually on Earth for a year before Trunks arrived the first time. He needed time to grow and had to eat after reaching his imperfect form. Four years of hibernation will do that to you. I fully suspect this fight to be a stomp for Gast but this Cell is probably still fairly strong. It's just an estimate but this version of Perfect Cell is probably around the strength of our semi-perfect Cell, maybe a bit stronger.


That's why he drank Gingertown which prompted Kami to fuse with Piccolo. What I mentioned was after, which was specifically to slowly gain strength.
He was hungry, yes, this is his way of surviving before becoming Perfect, but it shouldn't exactly make his base power weaker.
DB Multiverse page 2479
Damian Qualshy 12 4月
Galvanic was saying:
Vash was saying: Vegeta was at 18k power level when his DNA sample was taken. Goku and Nappa were 7-8k each. Gohan and everyone else were in the low thousands, since it was from the same battle. Unless an older and stronger version of Gohan sample was collected later on. None of the sample was strong enough to even beat Zarbon. This Cell should be a lot weaker than the original.

It's not like original Cell was capped at the power level of his donors. The strongest source he had was King Cold, who died to a Super Saiyan yet he was on par with Kami-fused Piccolo, and eventually surpassed him.


Original Cell also had more time to develop and he drank a lot of people to get where he did. This one is rushed to "perfection", and barely out of the tube. His biology lacks the pure power and potential of Frost Demons, all he has is one weak Namek and the three Saiyans, that means one human hybrid at 18k power level and only Namek Saga Vegeta being a Super Saiyan donor.
He IS weaker, has to be. I would confidently say that he should be just above the original's Semi Perfect form, so still formidable but doesn't require Super Saiyan 2 Gohan to be defeated.

Also Cell wasn't "on par" with Kamiccolo. He was outclassed during their first encounter in Gingertown. 1 Replie(s)
DB Multiverse page 2479
Damian Qualshy 11 4月
I love how he looks like a combination of all three designs.
And it's in color! God damn! Beautiful.
DB Multiverse page 2479
Damian Qualshy 11 4月
mAc Chaos was saying:
I'm not sure if Vegeta is just wrong or if it's a mistranslation, but they don't change their power level with their emotions, that is only Gohan. They just can raise it or lower it due to ki control.


Well, I figure that Vegeta mentions that specifically because of Gohan. And emotions play big role regardless in your power level, ESPECIALLY for Saiyans.
Saigo no Son page 47
Damian Qualshy 10 4月
hetap was saying:
It never made sense to me for them to take the scouters off. Like I understand not trusting their initial power level, but you would want it on to see any increases when they do go all out. By taking them off you become blind to what their current power is. (Yes, this is nitpicky, and was an issue in the OG manga, not this one!)


I think they can instinctively know the change anyway, or at least that something hapoened, and it's also being too sure of your own power.
Vegeta picked on Ki Sensing pretty quickly you know, so it is something that Saiyans can do naturally, unlike other species, just like flight and Ki blasts.
Saigo no Son page 47
Damian Qualshy 10 4月
MY BOY CELL IS HERE!

CompactCoven was saying:
The angle on Gast here reminds me so much of when he was messing with King Piccolo, I love it!


OH yeah he's menacing and he knows it.
DB Multiverse page 2478
Damian Qualshy 10 4月
ZenBuu was saying:
Damian Qualshy was saying: This edgy OC has more detail than most of the comic. Insane.
You just had to leave this comment, right Damian? Can't you just say something nice for once, without getting provoking at the same time? This is honestly kind of sad behavior. You do the same sometimes with the other comics by the way. Just Saiyan.

You know, you don't always have to say something about everything, especially if you don't have something nice to say, a comment that's actually meant to be a compliment... and not a well disguised insult. Sometimes it's better to move on, instead of beating a dead horse. This is the last page, so please just move on.


Okay yeah, sorry, fair enough, and I definitely didn't need to add the "edgy" in the edit either (will have to check my comments on other comics to understand what you mean though, I definitely don't remember being negative/passive-aggressive towards goten-kun work or Blanco for example, but it is my view on myself which is obviously biased).
But it's kind of like the last page where Sayazur made fun of the readers about something that wasn't even the problem with the comic. Do you reckon that was necessary? Or that it's his comic so he can do it?

Neither comments like mine, or Sayazur's recent one here, are justified. And I am sorry for making artists and moderators lives harder, I absolutely do need to work on myself to stop doing that lol. Beating the toxic nature of human isn't easy when you do it long enough.

So, as you said, let's put Broly's story behind us and I am waiting for the next one either way. 1 Replie(s)
DBMultiverse Special OAV - Broly Final War page 82
Damian Qualshy 10 4月
This edgy OC has more detail than most of the comic. Insane. 3 Replie(s)
DBMultiverse Special OAV - Broly Final War page 82
Damian Qualshy 10 4月
Oh yes! It's Super Saiyan 2 instead of Rose! 1 Replie(s)
The inexorable distortion page 30
Damian Qualshy 9 4月
I miss Gogeta Jr.
DBMultiverse Colors page 322
Damian Qualshy 9 4月
SonkeyDGoofy was saying:
Damian Qualshy was saying: TO BE FAIR he doesn't know Krillin. He was introduced to Gohan as well as Bulma but theoretically the only connection Gohan would have to this place is Goku and ChiChi True but he is wearing the same gi his dad always worn. I'm wondering if Goku will interject by talking to Gohan through King Kai.


Why would Goku ever meet King Kai without Kami vouching for him to Yemma?
Saigo no Son page 46
Damian Qualshy 9 4月
Meng_Shu was saying:
Damian Qualshy was saying: You really use Fandom as your source of information...? And not all of them have it mentioned, like Slug.
"Like several Movie villains, Toriyama had a hand in his development. In particular, his design under even Toriyama's personal sketches often ended up being revised. In order to make his true species a surprise to viewers, in particular, Toriyama added in a special helmet as well as a body suit with gloves to avoid giving away evident Namekian traits."

https://dragonball.fandom.com/wiki/Lord_Slug#Development
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Any source is open to being wrong, but it's reliable enough to take at face value, plus, it is constantly moderated and provides a number of citations.


Sorry that comma wasn't supposed to be there. Slug has it, Cooler as well I think, but I should have checked the others to be absolutely sure.
I'm just against Fandom overall because the site itself is terrible and indie wikis should be supported instead. That's why I'm taking all fandom wikis with a grain of salt. 1 Replie(s)
DBMultiverse Colors page 321
Damian Qualshy 9 4月
TO BE FAIR he doesn't know Krillin. He was introduced to Gohan as well as Bulma but theoretically the only connection Gohan would have to this place is Goku and ChiChi 1 Replie(s)
Saigo no Son page 46
Damian Qualshy 8 4月
Meng_Shu was saying:
Damian Qualshy was saying: Actually.. Didn't Toriyama design Lychee as well? I know he made almost all of the movie designs, with only a handful being done by others. And just because it's not canon to his work in the manga, doesn't mean it's not his character.
There's no mention of it on DB fandom so likely not. All of the other characters that Toriyama designed have mentions that Toriyama designed them.


You really use Fandom as your source of information...? And not all of them have it mentioned, like Slug. 1 Replie(s)
DBMultiverse Colors page 321
Damian Qualshy 8 4月
Razmalian was saying:
So everyone has conveniently forgot this was the story of how Broly was found alone in space covered in ice and instead has chosen to rail the author for not making an easy win on the side of the Universal defenders.

Of course it "doesn't make sense", it's a story about Dragonball using Z Broly of all people. This isn't your personal comeback story like the days of comics where the fan base picks the ending.

And if you all get mad at me for calling the "critics" idiots, just remember:

The comic fan base, when given the option to allow Tim Drake (Robin, later Red Hood) to be saved by Batman and live, or die to the Joker...

...CHOSE TO HAVE HIM KILLED.

NONE OF YOU ARE ANY DIFFERENT. Get over yourselves or write your own stories.


OK Mr Copium, this isn't about Z Broly and never was, because it's Salagir's DBM Broly. And no one cares that they didn't win, we care HOW they lost and a bit about some other headcanon shenanigans about how the DB universe works in Sayazur's mind.

And if you want to act smart, at least get your facts straight. It was Jason Todd. It was also a hundred years ago and Jason wasn't even a good Robin, get over it. 1 Replie(s)
DBMultiverse Special OAV - Broly Final War page 81
Damian Qualshy 7 4月
FearfulDivine was saying:
RetroOVER9000 was saying: With this one it's not that readers are complaining all the time, it's just you made a bad story. It happens. Not every DB story is good. Broly DBM is just garbage. You want to see Broly done right? Go watch Ultra Vegito. THAT is how you write Broly. Not this ever growing invincible "oh no his power goes higher higher higher nonsense.
Bro Ultra Vegito is even worse LMFAO this is 10x better then that


10x zero is still zero.
DBMultiverse Special OAV - Broly Final War page 81
Damian Qualshy 7 4月
Congratulations!
Chibi Son Bra did her best! page 199
Damian Qualshy 7 4月
Wow, the salt overdose.
DBMultiverse Special OAV - Broly Final War page 81
Damian Qualshy 7 4月
Actually.. Didn't Toriyama design Lychee as well? I know he made almost all of the movie designs, with only a handful being done by others. And just because it's not canon to his work in the manga, doesn't mean it's not his character. 1 Replie(s)
DBMultiverse Colors page 321
Damian Qualshy 6 4月
Duality of Gero, he's either very emotional or very straight to the point. I wonder if Cell will be revealed right now, maybe he's hiding already.

mAc Chaos was saying:
Nan-chan was saying: We still need an official explanation why he is older than videl, not just about height but age, videl is at best 10 or 11, and this gohan is prolly looking older than his 11 yrs old age

I do bet on hyperbolic machine but it's not yet confirmed
you dont need an explanation for everything


Also, he's a Saiyan. I know Goten and Trunks were eternally toddlers in DBS until Super Hero but just least look at Goku when he showed up at the last Tenkaichi Budokai.
DB Multiverse page 2477
Damian Qualshy 5 4月
Krillin, you and Gohan had like 5 minutes of getting to know each other. He was four, saying he's "one of us" is a biiig stretch.
Saigo no Son page 45
Damian Qualshy 5 4月
FishNChips was saying:
This Vegeta is probably Vegeta Sr., the father and future king of planet Plant, rebranded into planet Vegeta.

Will Yamoshi and others fail? Hmm


This feels too short of a time period for all those drastic changes between the Saiyan culture. Would make sense if it was at least Vegeta's (our Vegeta) great grandfather.
Yamoshi Story page 77
Damian Qualshy 5 4月
I love this so much.
Fanfic u4, chapter 12
Damian Qualshy 5 4月
Sayazur was saying:
jonathan_vik was saying: Okay, I think this joke has been run into the ground. Are there going to be any actually fights?
No. You (not you personnaly, the readers who complains all the time) get 70 pages of that and you get mad. Now, enjoy what you wanted since the beginning : A story were Broly is defeated by logic ;)


Actually what we wanted was a fight where people don't make stupid decisions and Broly is a real menace (like at beginning where he squashed Cell) instead of everyone being completely oblivious to what they can and should do. While the joke was fun, this is just you being salty at this point in that comment, I'm sorry. 1 Replie(s)
DBMultiverse Special OAV - Broly Final War page 80
Damian Qualshy 5 4月
That is a great look for him. I'm glad the artist of this chapter doesn't just pull from designs of Cell Arc or Buu Saga and makes something work in between those two. Really thought out.
DB Multiverse page 2476
Damian Qualshy 3 4月
OH MY GOD, this is worse than what he did to Bulma
The inexorable distortion page 27
Damian Qualshy 2 4月
JetMalakai was saying:
MajinPower was saying: They’ll show us all the power of Gohan Super Sayan but he is not in the tournament why?
Because the new Cell released by Gero will kill him in the next chapterbefore getting killed by Gast!

Gohan does not like fighting. Period, end of sentence. He only went in 16/18 because his friends and family went, and he's just a spectator.

Come on guys, we saw Piccolo go upside Goku's head with a clue by four about this. Gohan is basically never going to fight unless there's something important on the line or if someone is pushing him to do it. This was initially framed as a tournament for fun. He didn't do squat until people started going crazy and killing the audience members.


Gohan is like that specifically because there's always Goku around to do the fighting for him. This was even his reasoning for not training in DBS Broly and he was scolded for it by Piccolo.

Future Gohan and this one should be completely different, because there's no Goku around to help everyone. He needs to take the mantle and use his potential to protect everyone.

It's a big flaw of his character, albeit absolutely understandable for these two that they would hate fighting, but it would be really helpful if it would grow on them and they would actually do some good rather than fight only to survive.
DB Multiverse page 2475
Damian Qualshy 2 4月
And Gohan will be revealed under the suit now. Hopefully in all his Cell Saga mixed with Future Gohan design glory.


Shallot was saying:
MajinPower was saying: They’ll show us all the power of Gohan Super Sayan but he is not in the tournament why?
Because the new Cell released by Gero will kill him in the next chapterbefore getting killed by Gast!
Either that or he didn't want to enter the tournament. Kinda like why Krillin didn't come with Gast. Gohan doesn't love fighting and reviving his dad isn't possible. Living in peace seems more like him.

Well I wouldn't say Gohan wouldn't take the chance. Everyone else did, after all.
DB Multiverse page 2475
Damian Qualshy 2 4月
Sam Zebrado was saying:
I don't know why I have this feeling, but the previewing eyes seem better if they are not green as usual, e.g., red eyes... well


Bardock never had different eye color when he had visions, though..?

Dicax was saying:
I went back and re-read the end of the Goku/Vegeta fight. Bra seems more impressed with SSJ0 or SSJ Normal or whatever it is called than this suggested.

Also, she got rid of the ponytail after the Majin rebellion and it persists still.
DBMultiverse Colors page 317
Damian Qualshy 2 4月
Would he have this suit in the official comic though or is it for the memes
DB Blancoverse page 107
Damian Qualshy 1 4月
Oh wow, remember that one guys?
DBMultiverse Colors page 317
Damian Qualshy 1 4月
Oh I would have never expected Blue Popo to be here.
Chibi Son Bra did her best! page 198
Damian Qualshy 31 3月
DeathToKakarot was saying:
Eldagusto was saying: Your nickel was saying: How was Gohan handling three Androids by himself in base on the last page? Unless he was made an Android himself, that is

Why do you say he was in base, he was blonde. But yeah I think the androids aren't intended to all be as strong as even gero. He didn't need strength after he killed goku and didn't have a reason to make them stronger then him. Cell was his big strength project. Each Android probably was experimenting specific facets of design he was playing with, not necessarily just making them stronger and stronger. He wanted them to have some degree of autonomy but not enough power to be a problem.


How do we know the white colored hair isn't just part of the costume?



It is, and it's red.
DB Multiverse page 2474
Damian Qualshy 30 3月
Wait, it slipped my mind before but why would Vegeta even leave Broly alone in U6, and on the Sadala's moon of all places? And why are they attacking him after allowing him to live on said moon? 1 Replie(s)
DB Blancoverse page 105
Damian Qualshy 30 3月
Fussgaenger was saying:
I'm pretty sure too, that he's Gohan. But look his Eyes and Face. Damn, I never saw him so badass. It's not like him. Maybe it's because of the Timeline.

I'm sure too, Vegeta attacked the Earth, after he achieved SSJ, but before Goku died. He don't know that Form otherwise...


Vegeta never came to Earth iirc.
As for Gohan looking badass, let me introduce you to Future Gohan. 1 Replie(s)
DB Multiverse page 2474
Damian Qualshy 30 3月
Teleported_Bread was saying:
Paaah was saying: Damian Qualshy was saying: So.. Before we get more pages, I can only assume that this is where they die. Six months ago. And yet EVERYONE ELSE is still alive after that. Zamasu does a lousy job in this story, where it's assumed in DBS that Earth would be the last of the planets with living inhabitants.

Funny thing really that in Dbs's manga Black and Zamasu actually do kill everyone in the future before the secobd encounter with Goku and Vegeta (they just float around shooting ki everywhere, Trunks and the Kais appear to help but since they were only focusing on Black Zamasu just kills the last guy in a warehouse).

It may not be most peoples favourite version of the arc but I favor it happily, besides some hiccups (like the hakai attempt) it gives actual explanations how Mai or Trunks in seperate occasions escaped Black (someone who should sense any life force or ki being a kai apprentice and all).
Trunks emphasized how little of the population remained when he left and specified how long Goku Black had been rampaging. They did ultimately kill everybody in the anime. I'm not sure what you two are talking about. I didn't mention it before cause I didn't feel like paraphrasing or double checking atm lol
As for the manga, it was bad. Goku mimicking the Hakai like he did with the Afterimage, a vastly different and more simple technique by comparison, is one of those reasons why.


Problem with Hakai is Goku in the manga never actually saw it. But it's still not an issue for the technique to be copied, I mean Vegetto's way of dealing with Buu is already very similar to complete annihilation. Goku at this point is more than capable of pulling out a very barebones Hakai, especially with how hard it came to him there.

And no, they didn't kill everyone in the Anime. As a matter of fact, from the beginning of the arc to it's finish, the only person who actually died was Bulma. Otherwise Trunks wouldn't create the Spirit Sword if there was no one left except him and Mai.
The inexorable distortion page 25
Damian Qualshy 30 3月
They don't even see him? :sob:
Yamoshi Story page 75
Damian Qualshy 30 3月
Dicax was saying:
I really liked your art. It's some of the best on this site or in any DB fan work!

The writing and fundamental decision to start telling this story while DBS was still running (and presumably would have continued had Toriyama not died), however, are... well, let's just say you should stick with art. You're really good at that.


Except Toyotaro already wrote two more arcs and then some, so it's not like DBS has ended. The anime might have, sucks tbh, but manga? I don't remember anyone saying that it's finished. I mean I don't think Toyotaro would suddenly drop it after being handled the mantle of DB as the successor, just because Toriyama passed away.
DB Blancoverse page 104
Damian Qualshy 29 3月
Super Gojita 3 was saying:
is socks yamcha and bulmas kid?


Honestly, it has to be. After so much time.
Saigo no Son page 42
Damian Qualshy 29 3月
But why is Zalama chilling in some Earth cave? 1 Replie(s)
DB Blancoverse page 104
Damian Qualshy 29 3月
So.. Before we get more pages, I can only assume that this is where they die. Six months ago. And yet EVERYONE ELSE is still alive after that. Zamasu does a lousy job in this story, where it's assumed in DBS that Earth would be the last of the planets with living inhabitants. 3 Replie(s)
The inexorable distortion page 25
Damian Qualshy 28 3月
It's definitely fucking Gohan. That's the lie that Thorn mentioned. But if it's true.. FOR WHAT REASON?

And if he's fighting so effortlessly now, how did they get to this point at all? 3 Replie(s)
DB Multiverse page 2473
Damian Qualshy 28 3月
ChronoMager was saying:
Small typo:
"Hu, no sir." should be "Uh, no sir."


Not exactly, this might be the manner of speech. Just like they can say "Ho" instead of "Eh" or "Ha".
DB Multiverse page 2472
Damian Qualshy 28 3月
Rey Vegeta was saying:
mx1mum was saying: Sheesh. Gohan just decimated a whole town of innocent people.

This Gohan is a mindless monkey. He isn't Goku's son anymore


We don't know much about Nasu yet though.
Saigo no Son page 41
Damian Qualshy 28 3月
shirubihime was saying:
I still don't see how Trunks could defeat an immortal being that not even his father and Goku could defeat.
And the author better make Mai be useful, because otherwise it makes no sense she present herself to Black.


Zamasu is no problem, he's weaker than Trunks. And Black isn't immortal.
The inexorable distortion page 24
Damian Qualshy 28 3月
Yeah, Zamasu, apparently it was yesterday otherwise why would Earthlings still exist?
The inexorable distortion page 24
Damian Qualshy 27 3月
Mustard was saying:
Damian Qualshy was saying: King Kindred was saying: Those are some evil looks those Saiyans are giving.

And it's specifically his friends lmao, can't wait for these five to do the SSG ritual.
They'd still need one more though.


Well, there's Shallot.
Yamoshi Story page 74
Damian Qualshy 27 3月
For a second there I thought it's Salagir for some reason and I was about to say "wait, isn't he blonde"
DBMultiverse Special OAV - Broly Final War page 78
Damian Qualshy 27 3月
DrewSaga was saying:
Ayashi was saying: DrewSaga was saying: Gogetto was saying: I hole they spent those 10 years in the time chamber. They're gonna need it. I'm hoping we get an epic yamcha v Vegeta fight. Also I wonder if yamcha and bulma have a kid in this timeline

Honestly if the humans got their 48 Hours (2 Years inside the HTC) of training in the HTC then surely they'd be well above the Saiyans. Even Oozaru Vegeta wouldn't top that (or at least unlikely that he would).
lol no. People forget how ridiculous DBZ was...
"Oozaru Vegeta" should clock around 180k PL.
The humans could have trained themselves to a hundred times their end-of-dragonball power and they'd still fall against Nappa's Oozaru form let alone Vegeta's!

Considering Tien was literally able to push Cell and deflect an energy blast meant to kill/wreck Mystic Gohan and Krillin could cut Frieza's tail I seriously doubt Oozaru Nappa or Vegeta could beat Tien or Krillin with 10 Years of training if two of those years were spent in the HTC (which would be 12 Years). Oozaru Vegeta is early DBZ and is nothing compared to Frieza nevermind 2nd Form Cell. That's not ridiculous at all to think humans can beat that and I am sure Salagir would agree considering he had Videl wreck a Cell Jr.

Girl Buu was saying: Diminishing results is a thing and important to keep in mind when trying to estimate how strong the humans would be training with Kami.

I doubt they used the time chamber, the humans never did in the main time line because it would have killed them. People forget how dangerous that thing is.

Well, I guess we will see soon if they used the HTC. I recall Tien in DBZ refusing to use it not because he couldn't handle it, but because he realizes that he can't compete with Perfect Cell evcn if he did. Though he'd at least do better against the Cell Jrs probably if he went (and still lose rather bad).


Yes. Tien managed to PUSH Cell, and Krillin's technique can cut anything. But that literally doesn't mean that they both are powerful enough to do any substantial or lasting damage.

Cell was unfazed by the Kiko-ho spam and Kienzan will cut through anything regardless of Krillin's power. It would've even cut Cell's head off but that scene was pure anime filler for the drama.


Also, everyone here is really overestimating the humans' power at the beginning of Z and underestimating Hyperbolic Time Chamber:
— Yamcha, who already went to King Kai, before the start of Android Saga couldn't even handle the Gravity Chamber that Vegeta was using at Capsule Corp
— Kid Goku barely survived a month in HTC
— Future Trunks couldn't handle the pressure of HTC at first until Vegeta snapped him out of it
Saigo no Son page 40
Damian Qualshy 26 3月
I honestly expected "sadam husseim hiding spot" to be there
Super Dragon Bros Z page 132
Damian Qualshy 25 3月
Well then, here we go with the fight against the possibly biggest hipocryte of the entire Dragon Ball universe.
The inexorable distortion page 23
Damian Qualshy 25 3月
King Kindred was saying:
Those are some evil looks those Saiyans are giving.


And it's specifically his friends lmao, can't wait for these five to do the SSG ritual. 1 Replie(s)
Yamoshi Story page 74
Damian Qualshy 25 3月
Log out? Where does she think she is :susge:
Chibi Son Bra did her best! page 197
Damian Qualshy 25 3月
Absolute unit of a Saiyan. Great decision on the team to make it a separate page.
DBMultiverse Colors page 313
Damian Qualshy 24 3月
The nod to goten-kun is priceless.
DBMultiverse Special OAV - Broly Final War page 77
Damian Qualshy 24 3月
I very much appreciate and love this change for the transformation.
DBMultiverse Colors page 312
Damian Qualshy 23 3月
Shabby was saying:
FishNChips was saying: 4 on 4.
Goodluck, brave heroes! You will be remembered, because let's face it, you've got as much chance as a fly in a tornado

So, Tien was powerful enough to affect Semi perfect Cell. They were all powerful enough to not get one shot by cell Jrs.

Sure, they didn't train with King Kai, and Krillin didn't get his potential unlocked, but it's called potential for a reason.

They're nowhere near as powerful as their DBZ counters, but they could be well above 10k.

Now, Vegeta and crew should also be.

Also, they're all bones if the androids show up, hahaha.


Tien was "powerful enough" to push Semi-perfect Cell.
And they were all "powerful enough" to be literal Cell Jr amusement. 2 Replie(s)
Saigo no Son page 39
Damian Qualshy 23 3月
Teleported_Bread was saying:
Pizza was saying: I just want to say that trunks should be training them all to be at least yamcha level I get that this isn't the time but after making buu showed up and he was considered the hero of earth he should've started taking on students
It'll take too much time and would probably be too dangerous with Goku Black being able to sense ki. They'd be better off in the Room of Spirit and Time probably, but the Lookout has likely long been destroyed. If not by the Cyborgs, then definitely by Goku Black. They're basically stuck and their options are limited.


He should've thought of that after the Androids then. Plenty of time.
The inexorable distortion page 22
Damian Qualshy 22 3月
Seriously, why didn't Roshi ever learn how to fly? Even up until DBS, but it did make for a funny joke.. Kind of. 2 Replie(s)
Saigo no Son page 39
Damian Qualshy 22 3月
Way better armors here than what Cabba has, and similar to Shallot's but not the same.
Yamoshi Story page 73
Damian Qualshy 22 3月
Andres was saying:
Von Durmark was saying: Nah, this wouldn't work due to DBM Broly plot armor. He would just yell very loudly and the spit would die from his maximumest power.
If Carbonite worked, I don't see why this wouldn't.


The universe being destroyed with all the boundaries breaking, leaving behind absolutely nothing (no living realm, no other world, no supreme kai planet, etc) and he still survived. How does carbonite or magic spit compare to that? 1 Replie(s)
DBMultiverse Special OAV - Broly Final War page 76
Damian Qualshy 21 3月
Dislpay name was saying:
It's weird that they tried to keep demon king Piccolo as a mystery fighter, what was the thought proccess behind it?

Also this might sound like a weird critique but you guys gave too much polish to Bardock's armor, it makes the scratch marks look unnatural.


I'll agree with the broken parts, they don't look like the armor is broken but instead like they're the part of the armor's design.
Although I only JUST NOW noticed how messy his outfit is. Especially the arm bands. I didn't know he had two different ones lmao.

As for Piccolo, I think that it wasn't simply just his existence, but also the fact that he's the Nameless Namekian again. As Junior pointed out during his first fight. 1 Replie(s)
DBMultiverse Colors page 311
Damian Qualshy 21 3月
Nice Super 17 design nod and he looks like his own character anyway. Good shit with all those different Androids.
Also, finally Videl gets on the action.
DB Multiverse page 2470
Damian Qualshy 21 3月
Will they transform into fused Bra though?
Chibi Son Bra did her best! page 196
Damian Qualshy 21 3月
WOW so black hole wouldn't work, SS3 Gogeta didn't work, SS3 Vegetto didn't work, absorbing him wouldn't work, Mafuuba probably wouldn't work, can't kill him or do literally anything, can't even keep him locked in Hell because he'll break free, the universe being hakai'd doesn't destroy this guy, but Dabura's magic spit does the deed no problem?
Are you taking a piss?

Okay, rant over, this is insane. Show me more.
DBMultiverse Special OAV - Broly Final War page 76
Damian Qualshy 20 3月
BangBang was saying:
Damian Qualshy was saying: I still love that SS4 Vegeta hair, such a great design for the king

Well, he does seem to be Vegeta's grandpa, so...


Yeah but both him and his father had the same hair. The odd one was Tarble. And even Vegeta's imaginations of Super Saiyan and then Shenron's telling of Super Saiyan God - it was still Vegeta's hair. Kind of obvious why for the first one, but the latter not so much.
Yamoshi Story page 72
Damian Qualshy 18 3月
Hyperblade was saying:
shirubihime was saying: Isn't Zamasu immortal and that's why their universe was erased to begin with? Like, it makes no sense to try to defeat an immortal being...
This Trunks knows the Mafuuba.

He knew it in the original show as well, but no seal. And they don't have it here either. 1 Replie(s)
The inexorable distortion page 20
Damian Qualshy 18 3月
MUI was saying:
Ellie was saying: MUI was saying: Lot of possibilities how they actually were not dumb and defeated Broly. One of them:

1. Using Porunga to wish for the potara earrings.

2. Gogeta not playing around, going for the kill and checking if he is actually really dead.

Idk how else they defeat him, since he is way out of their league. Fusion is the only way they can kill him.

utilizing buu more probably having him absorb gogeta. we already know from the official story that gogeta is MUCH stronger than lolvegito.

Dont agree about Gogeta beeing stronger then Vegito. Toriyama literraly stated Gogeta and Vegito are equal in strength. For me its also the safest way to compare their powers.


Point is that Gogeta at this point in time would be stronger, because Goku and Vegeta are. Majin Buu Saga duo doesn't compare to their counterparts in this age, especially after training in Other world. 1 Replie(s)
DBMultiverse Special OAV - Broly Final War page 75
Damian Qualshy 18 3月
I'm honestly surprised Black and Zamasu didn't go on with their plan after Trunks and Mai died. It's not like they died like.. 2 hours before the main duo's arrival. 2 Replie(s)
The inexorable distortion page 20
Damian Qualshy 18 3月
I still love that SS4 Vegeta hair, such a great design for the king 1 Replie(s)
Yamoshi Story page 72
Damian Qualshy 17 3月
It's not simply about making bad decisions, by the way, it's about HOW they made those decisions. These characters were gone long before Broly screamed the universe away.
And then all the different rules and changes you made to the world that shouldn't be done at all, that's more of a problem most (I'd like to believe) people have with this story, not that the cast was simply stupid during the fight.

Let's see where you'll take us now though. I just hope it'll be different rather than "Oh Gogeta simply fought better" or whatever.
DBMultiverse Special OAV - Broly Final War page 75
Damian Qualshy 16 3月
Asturios was saying:
255 days for 74 pages, some of them with only a single drawing and no text

I didn't like it. I can forgive the drawings. I cannot simply ignore bad writing. This is a story after all and the drawings are just there to help our imagination.

I'll give some constructive criticism so the mods don't flag my comment

The biggest mistakes were including new rules, something Dragon Ball doesn't need at all. I'm talking mainly about this ice barrier thing. Another mistake was including old and weak foes. Introducing and killing them was a waste of pages that coul've been used to better explain and draw the main battle.

In your favor I have to say this was a difficult choice to make a special. The last (DBM Canon) Broly special pretty much concluded the story with nothing left to tell. Broly survived being exposed to maybe the biggest hazzard seen in all of Dragon Ball, a super massive Black Hole. It was a forced conclusion, Broly is just unkillable. He transcends every law of physics and biology.

Taking into account what was established for this scenario, If I had to write this special the first question to properly answer should be: what is there to tell? A last, last stand in the afterlife against Broly? Fine. So the second thing to answer or address should be what failed last time and one up it. In the end Broly wins, again, so this is pretty much a Broly wank. Broly is the main character here. So maybe something that could work is telling the story from his perspective. IMO this immediately solves the two biggest problems I mentioned before. You save many pages were you explain Goku's plan. Broly just finds weak enemies and kills them. Who were them and what were they doing there? Broly doesn't know. In the last pages he erases everyone just by powering up even more. You can even include some Broly wank for the fans. Maybe him just effortlessly tanking SS3 Gogeta, and telling him he's going to power up even more so Gogeta better try to stop him now. As an epilogue, you could say in 10 of our years Broly spends billions of years in a distorted space-time due to him powering up. Starving and being immobile for that long made him power down a bit to match current Vegetto.

Basically if you tell the story from Broly POV you don't have to explain anything and you can focus on the action and Broly wank.

I know it's easy to review in hindsight. I think you're a young writer and artist so be proud of being part of DBM and use this experience to learn. It also helps to surround yourself with people that can give you a good critic of your story before publishing it.


Making Broly actually talk and be menacing like in his first movie instead of a boring, ever-growing in power, ball of absolute nonsense that Salagir conjured would be great.
DBMultiverse Special OAV - Broly Final War page 74
Damian Qualshy 15 3月
FireMarshallBill was saying:
Damian Qualshy was saying: WHAT???
At least make him look older? They both look like teenagers. Actually, Shallot looks like he's a bit older than Yamoshi.
I don't care about Saiyan genetics, this is just crazy revelation.
It's because of his god ki?


HOW does that make sense, especially if he doesn't have it in the first place yet?



Osha was saying:
Damian Qualshy was saying: MaddoxX was saying: Damian Qualshy was saying: WHAT???
At least make him look older? They both look like teenagers. Actually, Shallot looks like he's a bit older than Yamoshi.
I don't care about Saiyan genetics, this is just crazy revelation.
Sayins don't age like humans do think of it this way maybe yamoshi is ~40 year old and both his sons are ~20 would make since seeing how yamoshi leads a pack and is well known and respected

Look at adult Gohan and tell me he doesn't look distinctly younger than adult Goku. Or what about Trunks and Vegeta?

These two (three) here, look about the same age. Yamoshi is depicted too young.

The again, if these are reminiscent of U6 Saiyans in DBS (which are supposed to be direct evolution of the ancient/good Saiyans), then I guess it does makes sense for their looks to be THAT way, more slimmer and whatnot, unlike modern Saiyans.
Give me a break, Goku has looked 23 for over 20 years.

Goku at the end of DB already looks different from Z. He's a proper adult throughout Z, unlike Gohan who to this day, even as an Ultimate Gohan, still looks like an older teenager ever since MBS started.
Yamoshi Story page 71
Damian Qualshy 15 3月
MaddoxX was saying:
Damian Qualshy was saying: WHAT???
At least make him look older? They both look like teenagers. Actually, Shallot looks like he's a bit older than Yamoshi.
I don't care about Saiyan genetics, this is just crazy revelation.
Sayins don't age like humans do think of it this way maybe yamoshi is ~40 year old and both his sons are ~20 would make since seeing how yamoshi leads a pack and is well known and respected


Look at adult Gohan and tell me he doesn't look distinctly younger than adult Goku. Or what about Trunks and Vegeta?

These two (three) here, look about the same age. Yamoshi is depicted too young.

The again, if these are reminiscent of U6 Saiyans in DBS (which are supposed to be direct evolution of the ancient/good Saiyans), then I guess it does makes sense for their looks to be THAT way, more slimmer and whatnot, unlike modern Saiyans. 1 Replie(s)
Yamoshi Story page 71
Damian Qualshy 15 3月
WHAT???
At least make him look older? They both look like teenagers. Actually, Shallot looks like he's a bit older than Yamoshi.
I don't care about Saiyan genetics, this is just crazy revelation. 2 Replie(s)
Yamoshi Story page 71
Damian Qualshy 15 3月
goddawnho was saying:
If a side story were released where Vegito appears instead of Gogeta and completely beat Broly, I think all the complaints would finally come to an end. It seems like people are overrating Gogeta too much, and that’s why there’s so much frustration.


People are overrating Vegetto. There's no difference between Potara and Fusion. Except this Gogeta fused with way stronger Goku and Vegeta than they did in Majin Buu Saga.
Also.. Gogeta not defeating Broly is only one of the problems. If you think switching him to Vegetto would solve everything about this comic, well...
DBMultiverse Special OAV - Broly Final War page 74
Damian Qualshy 13 3月
PkMario was saying:
You just HAD to open your big mouth didn't you?


I get that it would be hilarious, but it's a transition between flashback and present time. Look at the panel borders, I just noticed myself that they're different for flashbacks.
Saigo no Son page 35
Damian Qualshy 13 3月
It's Future Future Trunks!
Chibi Son Bra did her best! page 195
Damian Qualshy 13 3月
Sayazur was saying:
In fact, his state was frozen until that moment, but when he woke up, all the time that had been frozen for him was instantly restored as soon as the ice was broken. So, as soon as he woke up, he got a huge instant boost of power that had been paused, like violently releasing a rubber band.


I'm really sorry but I'm gonna be completely honest: this is hands down the worst thing that came out of this special. I can really get behind that the cast did some very questionable decisions and that the universe dies because of dimension boundaries being broken, even if Broly somehow survived (because he's Broly, amazing, although that's Salagir's fault not yours for writing this character like so), but that thing? Why not just simply let Broly get stronger while in ice instead of THIS? It's an insane statement that doesn't change anything. Actually this makes no sense because Vegetto SHOULD NOT be able to even SNEEZE at Broly after this years long power boost. You're making DBM Vegetto (created via Majin Buu Saga Goku and Vegeta) with basically no one to spar with (judging by his experiences with Bra he doesn't fight her all that often and doesn't even train much) 100x stronger than your own SS3 Gogeta who has at least double stronger fusees than Vegetto. And Gogeta not only barely did any damage, but couldn't even get Broly unconscious even when he was held by Buu. Vegetto just pushed him away and Broly immediately went down. After getting the massive power boost?

OH, and also also, why didn't Broly destroy Universe 0 then by his existence alone? I just thought of that, but if he did that here then after being powered up he should destroy everything in U0 before Vegetto turned Super Saiyan 2.

Third thing, wouldn't Broly die because LSSJ burns down the life span of the user?
DBMultiverse Special OAV - Broly Final War page 74
Damian Qualshy 12 3月
YellNinja1600 was saying:
Notice tien says can’t waste time. I think this is a clue that they will enter the time chamber there are already 4 of them. Krillin goes in with Yamcha. Tien goes in with Chiatzou. They will probably not be able to withstand the time chamber but they have each other to train with inside so it should be more helpful training with someone than vs alone.

If time chamber made goku surpass the androids 17, 16, and cell second form which is a big gap between each then this training should boost the z warriors a few tiers above themselves. Maybe Krillin gets the same boost he got from guru when he goes into and leaves the chamber here going in with a power lv of 177 and leaving out with 11,000.


They don't know about the time chamber, and I doubt Popo would just casually tell them about it.
Also, Goku barely survived a month there as a kid, and he's a Saiyan. What makes you think these three will as humans?

I'm not saying it wouldn't be cool, but also boring, and yes Tien maybe could pull through anyway.
Saigo no Son page 34
Damian Qualshy 12 3月
Your nickel was saying:
Super Gojita 3 was saying: so...the gang made things worse by doing something?

never mind the idea of just letting brolly burn through his life force with lssj, they had like what...10-15 years of mayhem?

just let him run his course and then use porunge and moori who are sitting in otherworld alive and waiting for brolly to die, they summon porunga when he is dead and just reset everything with the exception of brolly

even if brolly breaks the ice barrier that way, he already did so in this example.

I'm not a fan of the outcome or how anyone is portrayed, and I don't care what sal did with u20
Actually...that's a good point. Salagir commented on page 196 of the main comic that Broly's lifespan in LSSJ would be less than a year, so technically he should be dead by the time this comic takes place. But setting aside old/obscure comments, all the heroes really needed to do was just wait out Broly and the problem would resolve itself.


Broly would be dead by the time of his very first movie. Or at least the second.
DBMultiverse Special OAV - Broly Final War page 73
Damian Qualshy 11 3月
mAc Chaos was saying:
Pope Muffins was saying: mAc Chaos was saying: Damian Qualshy was saying: Now explain to me why Broly is stronger than the literal fabric of the universe. Because even for Salagir's depiction of the guy, this is absolutely awful.

Why does everyone vanish anyway? Technically, if this happened, then all the dimensions would be merged together instead of removed, no? I mean it had to start somehow, it's not like the universe just showed up like that with dimensions in place, someone created/split them (possibly Kaioshins) in the chaos.
This is in line with the Buu Saga, when Super Buu tried to scream so hard he would break all the boundaries between dimensions and destroy everything.

That was Buu breaking out of a pocket dimension (HBTC) and this is Broly surviving a reality erasure event, two different situations
No, I'm talking about when Super Buu was fighting Vegito. Vegito states that he's going to destroy everything by doing it (in the anime) and has to power up to stop him.

Here is the YT video of it: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QQTEWUHhRrA


OH, that's Kai I think, so maybe it did happen in the Manga.
But I'm still not sure if it's exactly the same as what's going on here with this special.

And I'm partially confident that Vegetto meant the Living Realm, not including Otherworld and Supreme Kai's Planet and most definitely not Demon Realm. We don't know what he meant by alternate dimensions either. Or what type of destruction would it be.

Also also, Buu is a magical being, Broly is pure power, so even more reason to say this isn't the same.
DBMultiverse Special OAV - Broly Final War page 73
Damian Qualshy 11 3月
So about that war.. 2 Replie(s)
Yamoshi Story page 70
Damian Qualshy 10 3月
Gogetto was saying:
Pope Muffins was saying: mAc Chaos was saying: Damian Qualshy was saying: Now explain to me why Broly is stronger than the literal fabric of the universe. Because even for Salagir's depiction of the guy, this is absolutely awful.

Why does everyone vanish anyway? Technically, if this happened, then all the dimensions would be merged together instead of removed, no? I mean it had to start somehow, it's not like the universe just showed up like that with dimensions in place, someone created/split them (possibly Kaioshins) in the chaos.
This is in line with the Buu Saga, when Super Buu tried to scream so hard he would break all the boundaries between dimensions and destroy everything.

That was Buu breaking out of a pocket dimension (HBTC) and this is Broly surviving a reality erasure event, two different situations

No he is referring to when buuhan was yelling so hard that the fabric of reality was tearing during the fight w vegetto


Was it anime only? I don't remember this at all, and it seems like a very memorable moment. Like Gogeta VS Broly shattering dimensions in DBS Broly movie.
DBMultiverse Special OAV - Broly Final War page 73
Damian Qualshy 10 3月
Girl Buu was saying:
Damian Qualshy was saying: Previous chapter started with an immediate flashback following the events of the first one, and the author stated there that's how the chapters will start as well, iirc.

I've never seen this, I don't always dip into the comments and when I do I don't always read them all. It is kind of akin to that Plinkett review where he said explaining things in supplemental material is pretty useless for a person who is just watching the movie.

That said I intuited what was going on, I don't think it is a big deal.


Ah, true, I get your point. But then again, and as you said for yourself, people who saw previous chapter start with a flashback and then present time, should infer that the next chapter starts the same now.
Saigo no Son page 33
Damian Qualshy 10 3月
mAc Chaos was saying:
Damian Qualshy was saying: Now explain to me why Broly is stronger than the literal fabric of the universe. Because even for Salagir's depiction of the guy, this is absolutely awful.

Why does everyone vanish anyway? Technically, if this happened, then all the dimensions would be merged together instead of removed, no? I mean it had to start somehow, it's not like the universe just showed up like that with dimensions in place, someone created/split them (possibly Kaioshins) in the chaos.
This is in line with the Buu Saga, when Super Buu tried to scream so hard he would break all the boundaries between dimensions and destroy everything.


No, it's not. Super Buu made a portal between dimensions, same thing that Gotenks + Piccolo did. They didn't break anything and would not break anything. It's just space manipulation.

Coolio13 was saying:
if the author is reading this - ignore all the negative comments. I really enjoyed reading this story, and it was one of stories I looked forward to seeing new pages about! Everyone has different tastes, and while people above just felt like down voting it like crazy, just know you have a fan here :) great work!


It's okay to like someone else's work, but being blind to all it's faults and taking every critique as "negative comments" and "down voting" is just wrong.

YellNinja1600 was saying:
The sad ending of universe 20. I always thought Broly was frozen due to wandering space so long. But to be frozen inanimated due to being responsible for a universe destruction is crazy work. So when he was sent back to universe 20 is he just turned to ice again since there is nothing in the reality of universe 20 anymore neither life and death.


Vargas would turn into ice immediately after getting there too, that's how silly this is. Either that or just disappear entirely like everyone else.
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Damian Qualshy 10 3月
Now explain to me why Broly is stronger than the literal fabric of the universe. Because even for Salagir's depiction of the guy, this is absolutely awful.

Why does everyone vanish anyway? Technically, if this happened, then all the dimensions would be merged together instead of removed, no? I mean it had to start somehow, it's not like the universe just showed up like that with dimensions in place, someone created/split them (possibly Kaioshins) in the chaos. 1 Replie(s)
DBMultiverse Special OAV - Broly Final War page 73
Damian Qualshy 10 3月
Teleported_Bread was saying:
Damian Qualshy was saying: Teleported_Bread was saying: Matrixkid was saying: Teleported_Bread was saying: There was only one timeline to choose from. These changes happened because Trunks traveled to it, much like what happened when he traveled to the past to save Goku (19 and 20/Gero appearing instead of 17 and 18, 17 and 18 being stronger than they were in the future, 16 joining the Cyborgs).
Pretty sure that Trunks's time travelling itself never actually changed anything, Trunks just thought it did due to his lack of understanding of time travel. This is all speculation on my part, but 19 and Gero were so weak that even in the future timeline, the Z-Fighters were able to beat them, and because of how short lived they were, Bulma probably never thought to bring them up. They still existed in both timelines.

16 was also probably around in the future timeline, but the difference in circumstances prevented the Androids from noticing him, leaving him locked up in the pod for all those decades.
As for 17/18 getting stronger, it's debated whether they actually are weaker in the future or not. Some say that just like when they killed Future Gohan, the Androids were just holding back against Trunks to toy around with him. And by the time Trunks could destroy them, he was too strong to tell the difference. Or, we could take DBM's logic that they got weaker over time.
My assumption was that Bulma didn't fully grasp true time travel yet and wound up creating a machine that splintered the timeline rather than change the future. It's probably a difficult thing to number down even for her, and she probably had some limits since her lab and Capsule Corp had seen better days. As for 16, he was probably inadvertently destroyed when 17 and 18 turned on Gero in Trunks's timeline or was relocated and lost, but the course of the past was altered enough that 16 found himself in 17 and 18's path, which gave them the idea to wake him up.

Damian Qualshy was saying: Teleported_Bread was saying:
Damian Qualshy was saying: Okay so it's not the unseen timeline, kind of lame. I hope it will be explained how and why this timeline changed and it WON'T be "Oh it's because of Trunks like in Z" because.. that is wrong.
If you're referring to that weird anomaly that altered the timeline slightly in Z (making 17 and 18 stronger, having them appear later and with 16 instead of just themselves) when you say 'Oh it's because of Trunks like in Z', I'm quite sure it's seemingly due to the equation Trunks's time machine runs on, and not due to Trunks himself. If Bulma was able to make a true time machine, their timeline would change, not branch off. I'm sure the math was difficult even for her, or she didn't have the time and/or worried about the Cyborgs knocking at her door and ruining her intents to change the future or something.

Sorry but this makes no sense. Why would the way the time machine works change how time travel works at all? You aren't inventing physics, you're inventing a machine that works with said physics.

The alterations, if there even were any as Matrixkid said, came from both Trunks and Cell being there (butterfly effect) but there shouldn't be any HERE just because Trunks showed up, and especially not to BEFORE he showed up. Otherwise each of all travels of Goku, Vegeta and Trunks in DBS would result in constant changes. But they didn't. They were locked to the timeline Trunks came from.

I also mentioned 16 situation in another comment, I guess on the previous page.
Oof, don't write comments when you're exhausted lol
Anyways I used words like 'math' and 'equation' because I was kinda thinking of how Einstein saw time and the universe and measured them. Surely deducing how to move through time would require an equation, physics, stuff like that. I've assumed Bulma's time machine isn't perfect, and that time travel is difficult even for her.

Speaking of the time machine, perhaps the alterations really were due to both Cell and Trunks both appearing in the past, but I suppose, theoretically, it's not impossible for Trunks's time machine to potentially cause a more drastic butterfly effect-like occurrence

Definitely could be caused by both time machines together after Trunks showed up when Cell was already there, I'm not denying that. And it also makes sense.

As for the time machine, I always imagined it that it can time travel once, and then be locked to the timeline it traveled so now it's "universe hopping" instead. Hence why Cell's machine got him exactly where he wanted to be but earlier, in the timeline where Trunks showed up before him. This would still work for the second Trunks by linking him to the changed timeline and not original, even in DBS, where he even traveled specifically to the same timeline that he was in before, but that theory was unfortunately broken by the usage of Cell's time machine afterwards.
Correct; When I mentioned 'Trunks's time machine' at the end, I meant 'alone'. My bad.
But yeah I do agree that it makes sense. Anyways, technically, the time machine can only travel once, since it requires fuel.

Basically, here's how I think it works and what happened: There are two ways of altering the past. One is to cause the timeline to splinter, technically creating a new universe where events happened differently, and the other overwrites the future you came from. Mortals like Bulma require a vessel but can figure out a way to travel to the past to change the future, but it's much much more difficult, if not impossible, to figure out how to ensure that vessel - a time machine - will be able to manipulate time in a way that can overwrite the future and keep the timeline from instead creating a new one. Traditionally, only divine beings like Gods of Destruction have the power over time that can overwrite the future, because of their greater standing from their statuses, however, items like Time Rings can protect a timeline from being overwritten, forcing the timeline to create a new splinter anyway. This is why Trunks's future still remained unchanged and still had Goku Black terrorizing Humanity, because he kept his Time Ring on, and would explain why Trunks's time machine can't change his future. It works on the same theory that gave birth to DBM, the multiverse theory.

With Cell, the reason why he was in the past was because he killed Trunks, as we know. I think the order of things goes something like this: Trunks gives Goku the medicine and returns to the past. He sees nothing has changed. At some point, Trunks kills 17 and 18 - either before or after he returns to the past again likely to make sure nothing went wrong despite his intervention. Either way, Cell sees the time machine and kills Trunks so he can travel to the past and become perfect as was his purpose. By encountering Trunks again in the past, he made Trunks aware of him, and by losing to Gohan later on, Cell doomed himself, making Trunks decide to use his newfound strength he built up by training in the past to destroy Cell after defeating 17 and 18. Doing so prevented his own death, and Cell from becoming perfect. Obviously, though, another splintering in the timeline would occur, or Cell would have ceased to exist.

I know it all gets very confusing and convoluted but an explanation is there. Nobody said it could be that simplified though lol


Oh yeah we're going too deep into this lmao, I think we should drop this before we go even more off-topic.

I'm just hoping to get an explanation for this series' timeline changes and what's going on quick, instead of a chapter later or something. 1 Replie(s)
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Delphince was saying:
WongTing was saying: Pay attention. It's not a years later conversation.

Its obviously recently after Goku and Piccolo died and Raditz left.
I am paying attention. Comic etiquette dictates announcing a drastic change in story chronology; it's not to be left to the audience guessing. If this is years before the previous set of panels, you narrate the time difference.


Previous chapter started with an immediate flashback following the events of the first one, and the author stated there that's how the chapters will start as well, iirc. 1 Replie(s)
Saigo no Son page 33
Damian Qualshy 9 3月
Teleported_Bread was saying:
Matrixkid was saying: Teleported_Bread was saying: There was only one timeline to choose from. These changes happened because Trunks traveled to it, much like what happened when he traveled to the past to save Goku (19 and 20/Gero appearing instead of 17 and 18, 17 and 18 being stronger than they were in the future, 16 joining the Cyborgs).
Pretty sure that Trunks's time travelling itself never actually changed anything, Trunks just thought it did due to his lack of understanding of time travel. This is all speculation on my part, but 19 and Gero were so weak that even in the future timeline, the Z-Fighters were able to beat them, and because of how short lived they were, Bulma probably never thought to bring them up. They still existed in both timelines.

16 was also probably around in the future timeline, but the difference in circumstances prevented the Androids from noticing him, leaving him locked up in the pod for all those decades.
As for 17/18 getting stronger, it's debated whether they actually are weaker in the future or not. Some say that just like when they killed Future Gohan, the Androids were just holding back against Trunks to toy around with him. And by the time Trunks could destroy them, he was too strong to tell the difference. Or, we could take DBM's logic that they got weaker over time.
My assumption was that Bulma didn't fully grasp true time travel yet and wound up creating a machine that splintered the timeline rather than change the future. It's probably a difficult thing to number down even for her, and she probably had some limits since her lab and Capsule Corp had seen better days. As for 16, he was probably inadvertently destroyed when 17 and 18 turned on Gero in Trunks's timeline or was relocated and lost, but the course of the past was altered enough that 16 found himself in 17 and 18's path, which gave them the idea to wake him up.

Damian Qualshy was saying: Teleported_Bread was saying:
Damian Qualshy was saying: Okay so it's not the unseen timeline, kind of lame. I hope it will be explained how and why this timeline changed and it WON'T be "Oh it's because of Trunks like in Z" because.. that is wrong.
If you're referring to that weird anomaly that altered the timeline slightly in Z (making 17 and 18 stronger, having them appear later and with 16 instead of just themselves) when you say 'Oh it's because of Trunks like in Z', I'm quite sure it's seemingly due to the equation Trunks's time machine runs on, and not due to Trunks himself. If Bulma was able to make a true time machine, their timeline would change, not branch off. I'm sure the math was difficult even for her, or she didn't have the time and/or worried about the Cyborgs knocking at her door and ruining her intents to change the future or something.

Sorry but this makes no sense. Why would the way the time machine works change how time travel works at all? You aren't inventing physics, you're inventing a machine that works with said physics.

The alterations, if there even were any as Matrixkid said, came from both Trunks and Cell being there (butterfly effect) but there shouldn't be any HERE just because Trunks showed up, and especially not to BEFORE he showed up. Otherwise each of all travels of Goku, Vegeta and Trunks in DBS would result in constant changes. But they didn't. They were locked to the timeline Trunks came from.

I also mentioned 16 situation in another comment, I guess on the previous page.
Oof, don't write comments when you're exhausted lol
Anyways I used words like 'math' and 'equation' because I was kinda thinking of how Einstein saw time and the universe and measured them. Surely deducing how to move through time would require an equation, physics, stuff like that. I've assumed Bulma's time machine isn't perfect, and that time travel is difficult even for her.

Speaking of the time machine, perhaps the alterations really were due to both Cell and Trunks both appearing in the past, but I suppose, theoretically, it's not impossible for Trunks's time machine to potentially cause a more drastic butterfly effect-like occurrence


Definitely could be caused by both time machines together after Trunks showed up when Cell was already there, I'm not denying that. And it also makes sense.

As for the time machine, I always imagined it that it can time travel once, and then be locked to the timeline it traveled so now it's "universe hopping" instead. Hence why Cell's machine got him exactly where he wanted to be but earlier, in the timeline where Trunks showed up before him. This would still work for the second Trunks by linking him to the changed timeline and not original, even in DBS, where he even traveled specifically to the same timeline that he was in before, but that theory was unfortunately broken by the usage of Cell's time machine afterwards. 1 Replie(s)
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Damian Qualshy 9 3月
ZenBuu was saying:
Damian Qualshy was saying: ZenBuu was saying: What exactly is happening in panel 2? Where do the DBs come from?

And why are the Dragon Balls so small? Because they are ancient? The dragon is apparently called "Tornegat", so it's not Porunga. I'm interested in the backstory to this and how exactly Chilled has stolen this one DB.

Also, Yamoshi has better things to do as he says, but for some reason they have time to hang out?

The Namekian seems to have pulled out a bag which holds the dragon balls. It's very unclear, and the woman then holds one of them as well for some reason. And then they disappear.
Also aren't they the same size as Earth balls?
Kanyon was saying: ZenBuu was saying: What exactly is happening in panel 2? Where do the DBs come from?

And why are the Dragon Balls so small? Because they are ancient? The dragon is apparently called "Tornegat", so it's not Porunga. I'm interested in the backstory to this and how exactly Chilled has stolen this one DB.

Also, Yamoshi has better things to do as he says, but for some reason they have time to hang out?

In panel 1 you can see the Namekian using telekenesis to pull the dragonballs from their bag.
Yamoshi wanting to hangout is default setting I guess, and has to snap into seriousness when the time comes. I get it. I'm the same way lol.
Yeah, I realize he pulls it out of a bag, but you don't see this bag on the last page on either of them. And then they just disappear again. It's indeed a bit weird, same as the DBs being so small as the Earth DBs.

About Yamoshi hanging out: when he rushed to the Saiyan king, it seemed to be pretty urgent that they will go to war with those infected Saiyans. I mean, shouldn't they somehow prepare for this war?


Yamoshi and everyone else just chilling for the last two days (or maybe weeks idk, there's a lot of time skips here and singular scenes happening between) is so bad. We should have gotten ALL of this before Yamoshi went to see Cumber and THEN dialogue with the King AND immediate war because that's how the situation was portrayed there.
Yamoshi Story page 69
Damian Qualshy 9 3月
kkk was saying:
I stand by my speculation last page, that this change is caused by another time travel other than the one Trunks and Mai just did. Someone time traveled to some point before this time, causing Goku Black to arrive earlier than expected. Similar to how Cell time traveled to some point before Trunks first arrived in Z, causing Trunks to arrive in a timeline with a dormant Cell.


Black arriving earlier wouldn't change anything, really. Especially since he, at least in the manga if I'm not mistaken, showed up right after Future Shin's death to Dabura. So while I trust that Zamasu would probably use this commotion to his advantage, if Shin, Dabura and Babidi aren't dead when he shows up, then at least Babidi would try to control him and probably even succeed, regardless of how strong Zamasu is.
Another thing is, Time Ring doesn't operate the same as Time Machine, so he most likely would not be able to show up in a different timeline than the designated ring let alone different time at first. And also also, Time Ring doesn't cause paradoxes or alterations.
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