Why would someone not like this art style?

I bet he does know how to use it and doesn’t realise it himself, I bet goku dodged it but something or someone else gets hit revealing his new magic abilities to him and everyone else.

And so, this arc is over.
I feel disappointed in the conclusion, so I edited the last 3 pages a little bit to give you an alternative take on it.

And then you would have Bra as a character who has accepted death but would be proven wrong later in the story when she has to protect U16 against Vegetto and XXI.

Okay, time to give a deep dive on why Vegito is wrong here. Specifically the "I was supposed to win this tournament!" part.

Now, what do I mean by Vegito is "wrong"? I mean, by all factors Vegito should not have come to this tournament expecting to win. Look at Vegito's two components, Goku and Vegeta, to see exactly what I mean.

Goku: Goku, since he was first training with Master Roshi in Volume 2, Tale 28: "Let the training begin", showed his interest in stronger opponents. This is the first time he see someone with skills far above his own in action. (Roshi running 100 meters in 5.6 seconds) From this moment onwards, whenever Goku has faced an opponent stronger than him, he never reacts angrily, or frustrated. He accepts the challenge and tries his best to come out on top. In Volume 5, Tale 53: "The final blow", when Goku loses to Jackie Chun, does he through a fit? Does he say, "Those strange techniques he has, they're so dishonest!"? No, he smiles, looks at Jackie, and says, "Hey, when I've trained more and gotten stronger, you wanna fight me again?". He accepts that Jackie is stronger than him, and sees Jackie as a goal of strength to reach towards. There is no point in Goku's life where he would pout and call his opponent dishonest, just because he lost. He didn't against Jackie Chun. He didn't against Tao or Tien. He didn't against Demon King Piccolo or Piccolo. Not against Raditz, Nappa, or Vegeta. Frieza, Cell, and Buu were no different. Any strange or unusual abilities his opponents had only made him strive to improve himself so he could defeat them. Not for any reason than because he finds combatting strong opponents fun.

Vegeta: Vegeta grew up with one lesson being constantly taught to him. You need victory, and you need to achieve it through any means. This lesson can be seen being applied his entire life. When he killed Nappa. When he tried to destroy the Earth so he could kill Goku. When he killed most of Frieza's men on Namek. When he submitted to Babidi's magic, just so he could be stronger than Goku. I feel like a case for dishonesty doesn't even need to be made for Vegeta. Him being upset about that would make him a massive hypocrite. And Vegeta crazes a challenge just as much as Goku does. When he let Cell reach his perfect form, he did so just to see if Cell's Perfect Form could even stand close to his power. And when Cell broke every ounce of pride in his body, did Vegeta roll over and cry, "Cell's perfect power... it's too dishonest!" No. He got up, got in the time chamber, and got stronger. Because that's how Vegeta's character works. He looks for the thrill in a tough battle.

Just to make my point clear, I don't disagree with giving Vegito some flaws. In fact, I think, if handled correctly, that it could lead to some insanely interesting scenarios. I take issue when the flaws inserted into a character directly conflict everything that character should stand for. Saiyans crave powerful opponents. Goku and Vegeta, specifically, crave strong opponents to spar against. If they thought they would've destroyed this tournament, they wouldn't have entered. It would have bored both of them, and been a waste of their time. Vegito also craves challenge. His fight against Broly is proof of this, allowing Broly to power up so that he can face the best challenge he's faced his entire life. I make these points only hoping to demonstrate how this story can improve, and maybe give a few pointers to any writers who may be aspiring authors or writers, trying to get inspirations from fan works they see online.

Whatever the case may be, thank you, for coming to my Ted Talk. I greatly appreciate your time. :)

I haven't seen anyone among Bra's defenders saying that dragon balls are a reason to allow deaths to occur. And the same Gotenks who sided with Bra, he would have fought against her if he was there, even if he knew everything would be fixed in the end.

She isn't innocent overall, but she's more innocent than Nappa.

Her reaction to her accidental killings back then was messed up, but considering it was probably already a common thing for her to see people die and get brought back, it made sense for her to view death as an inconsequential thing. Had she blown the planet up because she was evil, Vegetto would have been right to threaten her (or beat her up for that matter). But she blew it up because she has mental issues and was put into a situation where she lost control, and Vegetto thinks threatening her will fix those issues? That's now how it works. Anyway, the difference between Bra and Nappa is that Bra is good but not good enough to be immune to Babidi's magic. Nappa is evil. Gohan is in the wrong for hitting Nappa, but Bra, who wasn't trying hard enough to be good, is still a better person than Nappa, who wasn't trying to be good at all.

@DarrielOni
>Is Bra no longer a veteran warrior? Is Bra no longer a Saiyan?
Was she about to mearly get knocked out with a slap? No? So how is that relevant to what I said?
>It's just a joke. No need to get defensive.
Who gets defensive? I was asking if you guys are seriously equating getting killed to beeing slapped. And alot of people seem to.

Vegetto was about to BRUTALLY MURDER Son Bra, who is a teenager with mental issues, Gohan just knocked out Nappa, you know, the genocidal maniac, with a single hit causing no pain.

But Son Bra has a vagina, right?

Salagir, you guys do understand tone, correct? Dragon Ball has always been a gag series, so there is certainly supposed to be humour in it. However, I believe Oak's word's echo here.

There's a time and a place for everything. You all go from more or less finalising your butchering of Vegetto as a character and a concept by having him attempt filicide in front of his family, friend, and an assortment of complete strangers, then completely lambasting him by speaking directly to the audience through your characters about flaws you all created for him that only serve to undermine him as a character. And this is after you just finished, using one Bra to highlight the flaws of the other Bra by, once again, just taking audience critiques about the character and surgically inserting them into your story. And this is from a Bra fan, my username isn't "Son Bra" for no reason (and I find it hilarious that it wasn't taken, it either goes to show the terrible reception of the character or perhaps this website doesn't care who uses what name?). It feels like Salagir would rather this have been a manga central to Bra, and I don't even think that would have been a bad thing, but he knew he needed the Multiverse angle to draw people in before he focused entirely on his pet character. Which, again, not necessarily bad, but upfront honesty would have been nice about, oh...ten years or so ago.

This manga hooked me initially on the idea of a permanent Vegetto. He is my favourite fusion (outside of Kefla, as Salagir continues to refuse to acknowledge DBS, despite clearly taking inspirations from it later) and I was interested to see what they'd do with him. Oh and they gave him a daughter, an older Bra who is amazingly strong and badass, that sounds cool too, how amazing this fan manga is going to be.

Michelrpg was saying:
J.I.L was saying: — U19... Okay so what? Where is the retcon? because you don't agree with their reaction you scream, "retcon"? Cmon man. You complain about the story but don't even know how to properly apply literary terms in your analysis.

So, a group of people who come from a universe without resurrections, and treat death seriously, now suddenly not treating it seriously anymore - something which is a COMPLETE CHARACTER CHANGE - is somehow not a recton?

You have no right to talk about proper literary analysis if you think characters' world views doing sudden complete 180s without any explanation is not a recton.

You know creators instead of having Vegito try to kill Bra. How's about he use the Evil containment wave to keep her locked away for like I don't know until she learns something from this?

Thank goodness we don't have any ending like this.

As much as bra haters are praising it

And so, this arc is over.
I feel disappointed in the conclusion, so I edited the last 3 pages a little bit to give you an alternative take on it.



And then you would have Bra as a character who has accepted death but would be proven wrong later in the story when she has to protect U16 against Vegetto and XXI.

Krillin was saying: TheRealMcCoy59 was saying: If you think about it, she should have no idea what happens next.
Lol she saw the carbonite that hit her shoe in less than a microsecond. Do you honestly think she won't get out of this?

I honestly wish she wouldn't, if only for there to be a mixup for the first time in like a year.

If you think about it, she should have no idea what happens next.