The cut scenes of DBM!
A comic does not succeed on the first draft! We change, we re-change, until the final result that only you see ... Let's use this place to show some changes, or "censorship" which remained in draft form, never used ...
page 99
Change of position
Kat knows that the fight has begun, she still should pay more attention to the match than staying put with her butt on the ground...
page 101
Removed panels
Just so the story goes on faster.
Page 134 removed panels
The fury of gohan was longer, but the suffering of Pan, too heavily shown, even in drafts, became unsuportable to me. We're read by children after all.
page 146
The attack of Kulilin
Here you see a part (though very clear :p) of my scenario. I wanted Kulilin to take advantage of the inertia of its shell to let him continue the movement and strike.
This is not what Gogeta Jr. understood and he gave just one strike with it, but that does not accompany the movement, which was in my opinion a great loss of choreography.
Finally we found a scene that is very well put, but the last panel of this draft was lost which is a shame.
final report