DB Multiverse
DBM Universe 12-14 and "Mirai" world : Twin Pain
Written by Foenidis
Adapted by Adamantine
In this alternative world where Mirai Trunks comes from, all our heroes were killed by the cyborgs... This story tells the details of that, it tells you about a part of the common story of universes 12 and 14.
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![[Chapter Cover]](/imgs/fanfic/u14/cover-s.jpg)
In the little glade that was not so peaceful anymore, the fight went on with renewed vigour. The two cyborg had taken flight too in order to catch them in a pincer movement.
Krilin and Yamcha skilfully dodged their attack to the right and to the left. The assailant, not less skilled, went up into the sky to avoid flying into one another.
After a quick U-turn, they were now swooping down on them, their fists held out, aiming at their target...
Target that were ready to counter their attack.
The two fighters threw a direct attack to one another, attacks that, as they hit, violently hurled each of them backwards.
The brother and his sister abruptly stopped in their dazzling descent.
Right then, both orange clad men bombarded with an heavy fire from their two hands, the same kind of techniques that Vegeta liked doing.
They moved backward each time a bit more with each shot from their burning palms, as the effort needed to parry this fiery harassment paralysed the twins.
On the gound, Gyumao watched the aerial fight with amazement and thought that it wasn't going that bad!
Well, at last way away from the terrible pair, Krilin and Yamcha quit bombarding. They're panting and had the feeling that their arms were about to melt for they're burning them so much. They thought that it was going rather bad!
The cyborgs looked at them, mocking them. They too knew that their opponent were way beyond their level... A flash in the pan that wasn't going to be a fire. Even though, 17 smiled as he commented on their fight.
“Good! Very good actually... You surpassed yourself today!”
Krilin and Yamcha were inwardly seething with rage. They had to find the way to efficiently defend themselves. It was easier said than done, especially when facing such opponents whose strength were so superior to their!
18 spoke after her brother.
“Well, I guess they really care about those two...” She suddenly stopped talking, Chi-Chi's absence being blindingly obvious. “Eh, the female had gone away!”
17, furious, looked at Krilin, then Gyumao, below him.
“So that was what the three of you were plotting earlier.”
Without warning, 17 and 18 rushed towards the transfixed by fear giant.
“You're going to regret this!” yelled 17.
18 rubbed Gyumao's head who had ducked by reflex, his face distorted by an intense pain. The young woman flew up right away and started to randomly bombard the bushes behind the giant.
Behind her, 17 landed under Chi-Chi's father's nose in order to torture him with a punch of the bloody spot that stained his bandage. Due to the unbearable suffering, the giant fell on his knees once again, and then his upper part collapsed in front of the cruel young man.
A double yelling rand out, but they were not enough to distract the two tormentors from their revolting task. Krilin and Yamcha rushed, joining their forces again to neutralised 18 at first. But this time, she anticipated their their shot that she easily dodged.
Krilin gained speed and rushed toward the blond woman who made herself ready to parry his attack.
Yamcha changed several times his path to try and feint 17 that was busy raising Gyumao's heavy head. He tried to tackle the cyborg in order to make him lose his balance and tear the injured man from his clutches. A crackling later, Yamcha's feet swept the air and the fighter was pulled along by his momentum.
As for Krilin, he was once again facing 18. He knew that there was no way for him to outclass her in a single combat.
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Your comments about this page :
Michel
Zerfinity
Yeah, sounds a bit wonky, but the whole concept of time traveling is. Say you'd travel back in time and meet yourself. When you were at that time, you didn't meet your future self, hence you can conclude that at that time, your future self didn't time travel (at least not the same way). What caused the future to change? It is my firm believe that time cannot be changed except by someone (say, your future self) who's not supposed to be in said time (someone who knows how said time is supposed to go, which is the reason he can change time). But you did not meet your future self in your current timeline, so time has to be changed somewhere by another person for you to, in the future, travel back in time and meet your past self. Of course, this person also requires another person for the same reason, etcetera etcetera. Quite a paradox.
Michel
Cyanideman
joshuaissac
Their timelines had not split at this time, so it's both.
Michel
hiace50
It should be posible to go foward in time... but once your there, going back in time to where you started is imposible.
so time travel is posible, but not backwards.
Jfmam
Foenidis
Yep... this story concern Universes 12 and 14. So Mirai Trunk's futur and #17 and #18's universe.
It's explain under the title :
"In this alternative world where Mirai Trunks comes from, all our heroes were killed by the cyborgs... This story tells the details of that, it tells you about a part of the common story of universes 12 and 14."
ShMike
What would have made a stronger saga would have been if it was happening like in this novel. Gohan is training to become a Super Saiyan, so meanwhile whose left of the Z fighters need to put up a good fight, where some, if not all of them will die.
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